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Eyes that made the insides flutter high,
A secret exchange without words,
I can feel us coming closer, closer,
You've got the lightest gaze,
And a smile set aside just for me,
I've got nothing left to offer you,
I feel I've given all I've got,
Just when I think so,
You reach in and rip out a part of me,
I didn't know I had,
You bring out the best,
And the very worst in me,
This is the beginning of the fall,
The force of habit.
©2007-2009 ~DrownedNRisen
:icondrownednrisen:

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...i wrote this in 2 minutes.

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:icona-moonless-night:
It's really good for two minutes! :) I like the part, 'Eyes that made the insides flutter high, A secret exchange without words' :).

--
When I kiss you like a lover
That is when we discover
We are burning in the fire
This love will never tire
~Papa Roach
The Fire
:icondrownednrisen:
THank you very much :]
:iconwillow09:
Brilliant for something written in just two minutes.

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Due to recent cutbacks, and until further notice, the light at the end of the tunnel has been turned off. :raincloud:

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:icondrownednrisen:
Thank you very much :]

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